Kia Ora Gaitau, Thanks for the eye catching presentation. Your writing has made lots of progress. From my point of view you have improved the way you organise your ideas, the vocabulary you have used and the paragraphs makes for easier reading. Miss B
Kia Ora Gaitau,
ReplyDeleteThanks for the eye catching presentation. Your writing has made lots of progress. From my point of view you have improved the way you organise your ideas, the vocabulary you have used and the paragraphs makes for easier reading. Miss B